EILEEN
TABIOS Engages
The Shape of a Box
by Grace Curtis
(Dos Madres
Press, Loveland, OH, 2014)
The
witty intelligence in this collection is ever more pleasing because it sneaks
up on you. Grace Curtis’ The Shape of a Box is storytelling
without being spoonfed narrative, containing enough gaps, shades, and/or shades
that deepen the tale due to our imaginative involvement. In fact, I even found this ars poetica within
the poem “Stories We Tell of Ourselves”:
“Some stories …
[…]
hinge on supporting characters but more
so
on ourselves.”
The
collection is also strengthened by its poems’ interconnections—at times a circling back structure that references
matters raised by other poems.
Fortunately, such poems do not depend on the reader having had to read
those other poems so that the poems can be enjoyed individually. For example, the compelling “the story as a
package” presents a nursing attendant caring for an old woman and coveting the
old woman’s ring. The nursing attendant
hides the ring in one of the dresses in the closet, thinking that she could
collect that ring after the woman’s death.
But when the woman dies five years later, the woman ended up buried in
that same dress. Later, when the old
woman’s will is read, it is revealed the woman had left the ring to the nursing
attendant “for all her years of service.
The attendant kept the empty burgundy ring box.” Ooomph.
And
a ring would show up to great effect two poems later in the book:
trinkets
as containers of myth
I dreamed bandits found not a diamond ring, but rather, a box of
trinkets. They tied me to a chair and held each memento before my eyes. If the
story was good enough, the item was placed back into the box. If not, it was smashed and burned. One by one
the trinkets were destroyed until I became a better storyteller. Each item
became a character; its flaws, a place. A map along a lifeline emerged, the
trinkets illuminated as personal myth. Some things we keep because we dare not
let them go, because we’re not sure, or because we can spin a damn good story
around them.
A
similar linkage occurs elsewhere with poems presenting Michael Anthony, the
staff member from the 1955 TV show The
Millionaire who would go about knocking on people’s doors to present the
occupant with a million-dollar check.
The links are effective in manifesting the sense that there’s often a
whole bunch of things happening that’s not obvious and are behind the
scenes. And perhaps that’s one of the
major “themes” of the book, deftly evoked too by this deceptively haunting poem
(deceptive in the sense that I didn’t expect to be thinking about it days and
days after I first read it):
the
package as appropriation
If Susan Sontag was correct when she wrote “To photograph is to
appropriate the thing photographed,” then I stuffed thousands of objects into
vacancy. Surprise would be a package
containing that which evolved from among the pictures I used as stand-ins for
trinkets. I am good at one thing: not being good at most things. This is a
truth I can sink my teeth into. My father looked a little like Michael Anthony.
For all I know he may have been the spitting image of John Beresford Tipton,
Jr. because in over 200 episodes, no one ever saw anything of Tipton but his
arm and hand. Both Tipton and my father wore suits most of the time.
At Christmas we would gather around the couch my father and mother
reupholstered numerous times throughout our childhood. My dad would organize
us, set the timer on the camera, come back to take his place, and then, proceed
to appropriate us all—the real kids, the foster kids, and him and mom. We’d
smile (of course we did) even if the mysterious substance of anger flowed
through the body of every last person in the photo. Year after year, the only
thing that changed was the couch.
The
title The Shape of a Box raises the
matter of the surface of a packaging, whether it be our bodies (e.g., our face)
hiding tension or anger, or a psychological constraint, or what a dress pocket
makes invisible as it contains. Curtis
develops this theme in imaginative and inviting ways.
She
even presents the packaging as metaphor.
Displaying the collection’s underlying strength of wit, here is the poem
“Weeding” below in its entirety. I don’t
need to say anything about it—it’s easy to get.
But that it’s easy doesn’t dilute the deep enjoyment it elicits; it’s
the kind of poem you’ll remember months later with a chuckle. That
is a gift.
Weeding
During sex this morning,
I thought about needing
to pull the milk thistles
from around the pink
petunias, the prickly
stalks awkward beside
the filmy petals.
I wondered if they come
with the mulch each year,
those willful weeds
that thrive on disdain.
I thought about how
I’d get the old
Sears Hardware bucket,
gloves and kneeling pad,
find a spot
among them, and begin
to gently pull, my hand
low on the stem.
I thought about placing
each weed into the pail,
filling it up to the top,
the summer blooms spared,
and the, how good I’d feel
when it was done.
*****
Eileen Tabios reveals something about herself in ARDUITY'S interview about what's hard about her poetry. Her just-released poetry collection, SUN STIGMATA (Sculpture Poems), received a review by Amazon Hall of Famer reviewer Grady Harp. Due out in 2015 will be her second "Collected Poems" project; while her first THE THORN ROSARY was focused on the prose poem form, her forthcoming INVEN(S)TORY will focus on the list or catalog poem form. More information at http://eileenrtabios.com
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